-The lighting and colors are magnificent!
-The attitudes of the characters are clear and perfect for this scene!
-I think if the cup and saucer were a plate the cutlery would make more sense.
-I for one love the chain from the watch and that it almost acts as a 'rabbit trail'
like he jumped right over her without a glance!
-I can see her leg and foot in the distance and I don't personally think there's anything wrong with the way her body looks.
-I also like that she's in the middle of turning a page.
-Extremely well done story telling!